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What are the advantages and disadvantages of living a number of places during childhood years



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Jul 8, 2023   #1

pros and cons of living a number of places during childhood years



In this day and age, it has become increasingly common for families to shift various accommodation during childhood years of their children due to a lot of reasons like profession. This activity brings about a lot of benefit, while some adverse effects are still available.

On the one hand, usually changing living places may stimulating the cultural adaptation ability of children. For example, when settling down in a certain place, children must immerse in customary activities as well as tradition values such as cuisines and fashion, thereby widening their horizons and develop their new passion. Consequently, this helping such children improve their adaptability and get used to abrupt changes in their future life. Moreover, living in various divergent places can widen children's relationship. To clarify, if kids were regularly moved to new environment, they would specialize in communicate to strangers in order to make acquaintance with. As a result, those will absolutely have a outstanding ability of communication, therefore allowing them to diversify their networks without difficulty.

On the other hand, education process may be problematic when changing to new studying environment. Namely, participate in novel curricula may cost a lot of time of new students, let alone spending time for make friends with classmate. Therefore, children in a new learning space come at the expense of mental diseases like depression. Furthermore, health problems should be considered although these factors may appears in small proportion. For example, when moving from temperate regions to hot and humid lands like South East Asia, any people may have more risks of infecting tropical diseases like malaria as well as thermal shock. Accordingly, only after adapting a long time do newcomer resist again climate change.

In conclusion, despite the potential benefits mentioned above that living in differents places during childhood can bring about, it seems to pale in comparison to the drawbacks involved.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15384  
Jul 10, 2023   #2
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