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the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.



Daz Nguyen 1 / -  
Jul 9, 2024   #1
The world's economy is developing, and the trend of online shopping at home is increasingly popular.A wide variety of things are available in the online market.Some online shopping apps include shoppe, lazada, tiki,etc. You can easily purchase them with the help of your mobile phones, laptops, tablets.
Online shopping is great for working people who follow busy schedules. People who do not have a lot of time to go to the markets, they can buy products online. In Particular, you can save money on petrol, packing or bus fares. Then, you sit on the sofa while making any purchase. On top of that, buying online does not restrict you with their timings. They are open all the time, so you just need to make a purchase and the item will be delivered to your home.
However, anything has its downside and so does shopping online. It can raise several problems regarding your information security. Sometimes you will disappoint by delivering a wrong or damaged package. When you buy any product, you often have to pay a lot of postage and wait for your goods. So in fact, the long wait for item delivery is not suitable for urgently required items. Moreover, you can not try on clothes and shoes if you buy online. Seeing only pictures is sometimes not sufficient to make choices. Because of some reasons, many people set their foot back from online shopping.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15458  
Jul 13, 2024   #2
Well, your essay would get an automatic failing score because you wrote less than 250 words, did not follow the correct response format for a task 2 essay, and you do not have a properly developed restatement + Writer's opinion and thesis statement. You basically rushed through this essay without considering the consequences of your improper presentation. Use the 4 paragraph presentation next time. Be sure to develop the 2 reasoning paragraphs by using proper discussion samples and expand on your discussion reasons and samples. I know you can do better than this because I can see the potential in this current presentation. You just need to be guided to achieve your full potential. Use the sample essays at this website and previous advice I have given to other students to help guide you.


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