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Essay about the advantages of co-operation in your learning English



lahavip06 1 / 1  
Dec 18, 2016   #1
I believe that the cooperative learning method is a great way to learn, especially in English learning because it's makes learning more fun, and understanding. Students have been asked to problem solve, work with a small group or partners in many subjects. I find that co-operation in English learning has many advantages are we speak a lot.

In some subject such as Writing, Reading, Grammar, we learn to labor together toward common goals, we can share our knowledge with others, and we can complete the assignment faster. In Oral English, we not only accountable for speaking but also for helping our friends in speaking. We listen to our friends, ask some topics to practice skills about oral. Co-operative learning builds learning communities as we grow to be experienced at how to increase skills to speak English. Thanks to this, it encourages we to engage in high-level thinking skills and helps us get higher scores on tests.

Moreover, in co-operative learning, we can get to speak at the same time. We are confident to say what we want to say and I can ask something which I don't understand because teacher and friend can correct the fault for me. Thus, cooperative learning increases opportunities for us to produce and comprehend language.

In summary, co-operative learning seems to be an effective learning method.It helps me develops social skills similar to those needed in the world outside school. So, I especially like the aspect that learning together of relying on co-operation can be motivation to succeed.

Master x - / 2  
Dec 18, 2016   #2
Hi lahavip do not give always your opinion in your essay it's not interesting for examiners
chizy7 6 / 51  
Dec 18, 2016   #3
Your essay needs a few adjustment to produce a better response. I feel like your are just listing bullet points without properly explaining your points and you also need to look into your grammar usage to correct the errors
krempetkov 13 / 27  
Dec 18, 2016   #4
it's makes learning more fun - it makes the learning process funnier...

Students have been asked to problem solve, work with a small group or partners in many subjects -- You should rewrite this sentence, as i was not able to understand what do you mean.

Many students have been asking for solution of the problem and they started working with small groups and partners in many of the school subjects.

many advantages are we speak a lot. - Again, the idea is not clearly expressed - as we use it a lot?

some subject - subjects

we not - we are not

Co-operative learning builds learning communities as we grow to be experienced at how to increase skills to speak English. - ...learning communities and as we grow and become more experienced, we start to improve our English speaking skills.
OP lahavip06 1 / 1  
Dec 18, 2016   #5
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can you help me correct the fault


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