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What are the advantages of travelling by air?



Eiravk 1 / -  
Dec 10, 2021   #1

choosing the mode of transportation - air travel



Travelling by air is a modern and fast form of travel. It is gradually becoming the first choice of people when travelling long distances because of the benefits it brings.

Firstly, air travel saves us a lot of time and shortens travel time. Its travel speed is nearly 40 times faster than road travel. The second is the safety it brings. Travelling in the air is always safer than other means of transport. Their risk of being in an accident is always less than road vehicles (trains, buses, cars) and waterways. In addition, moving in the air is less prone to shock, ensuring the safety of goods and giving customers a better experience. The next benefit is the guarantee of professionalism and standards that are superior to other methods. The service staff have all undergone rigorous training, so the style and working style are also higher than that of the garages and shipping lines. While other forms of travel are hindered by terrain and range, air travel easily connects many places, both domestic and international, and is not subject to any terrain obstacles. Finally, air transportation has clear documents and specific commitments, so the interests of customers are also more secure.

Above are some advantages of air travel. Hope this information will be useful in choosing the mode of transportation for your trips.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15347  
Dec 10, 2021   #2
It is impossible to discuss advantages without referrring to the comparison point of the alternative travel type. While such comparisons are inferred in the paragraph, the writer has not provided convincing evidence to prove his point. For example, when a person travels by road, a trip that would take 3 hours by car will only take 40 minutes by air. Similar comparison points for the other air travel advantages should be made throughout the presentation to further enhance the logic and / or sound discussion that you are providing. Doing so will help you avoid parenthesis presentations that do not really help since these tend to seperate themselves from the actual discussion or presentation. Emphasizing the safety of air travel due to the easily avoidable traffic accidents would have enhanced this presentation as well. Remember that giving blanket claims will be met with questions by the reader. Questions that can easily be responded to by presenting valid examples for your claims.


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