IELTS: Ages of the populations chart - Yemen vs Italy

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate the age levels of citizens living in two countries, Yemen and Italy, in 2000 and also show forecasts for 2050 by grouping people into three age groups: 0-14, 15-59 and over 60 years.

Looking at the first two charts of Yemen, It is clear that though the first group of 0-14 year olds took the largest portion of the whole population, in numbers 50.1% in 2000, the number of young generation will significantly decrease to 37% in 2050. The second group of people from 15 to 59 ages took 46.3% of citizens in the year of 2000. However, there could have been a steady increase in the number of this age level. Only 3.6 % population lived over 60 years while projections show that the amount of members of the last group will have slightly risen to 5.7% in 2050.

When it comes to the data of Italy, it can be seen that the biggest portion of pie chart was taken by the people aging from 15 to 59 years, in numbers 61.6% in the year of 2000, but this trend can dramatically drop to 46.2% in the next fifty years. 24.1% portion was taken by individuals lived over 60 years in 2000. Surprisingly, this indication might be nearly doubled rising to 42.3%. The youngest group only took 14.2% and also it could fall to 11.5% in 2050.

Overall, as can be seen from the pie charts, in the future the population of elderly people will outgrow the young generation in both countries.

The two countries show different character following the data represented hence the conclusion should be reviewed as I think you should have drawn a separate sentence for each of the countries in the conclusion.

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