The air circulation in an accommodation, which affect room temperature and energy spent

The diagram explain about the air circulation in an accommodation, which affect room temperature and energy spent. Overall, most of the air leak in the main floor of the building, while in the attic, most of it get out from the house. In addition, lights cause the air leave the house.

Based on the diagram, the air leak into rooms through the space inside the house. In the basement, the air go in through the crawl space, behind the outdoor faucet and by dryer vent and windows in the electrical outlet room. In the main floor, there are loots of air leak in through the door and windows, while in the kitchen and bathroom the air come in by the fan vent in the wall

Based on the diagram, in the attic, there are many amount of the air which leave the room. The recessed light also cause the air out from the house. In addition, the come in air will out from the main floor, through the attic to the outside and affect the room temperature in the house.

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Hey, here are some mistakes and suggestions for your reference


Plural



Pronoun usage unclear


Maybe replace space with holes?


In addition, the air which flow through the attic to the outside from the main floor, affects the room temperature in the house.

Hai Riska,
its a good explanation about the air circulation. However, please attention with singular or plural verb:




you have double connjuction


you don't have subject in this sentence, you can add personal pronoun like it

The diagram explainS about the air circulation in an accommodation HOUSE, which affectS THE room temperature and energy spent CONSUMPTION. Overall, most of the air leakS FROM THE in the main floor of the building, while in the attic, most of it THE AIR getS out from OF the house. In addition, lights cause the air leave the house.

... the air leakS into rooms t... the air goES in through... and by THE dryer vent a... electrical outlet room . ... there are loots LOTS of air leak in PASSAGE WAYS through the door and ... air come in by ENTERS THROUGH the fan vent in the wall.

Based on the diagram, ALSO ILLUSTRATED IS THE ATTIC WHERE in the attic, there are many A LARGE amount of the air which leaveS the room. The recessed light also causSe the air out AIR TO LEAVE THE from the house. In addition, the come in air will out from the main floo ENTERING AIR WILL ENTER AND EXIT FROM THE MAIN FLOOR, through the attic, to the outside ...

Don't start your paragraphs with the same words. These repetitions show a weak grasp of the English language because your vocabulary is limited to a few words to describe certain things.