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Topic:Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
The apple never falls far from the tree seems to be true. The methods of upbringing have always been raising long-standing debates. While some people argue that children must be taught at school to be a good person, some others claim this idea is totally wrong because children spent most of their time at home with their families. Therefore, I too believe that the personality of a child is mainly formed at home and depends on parents.
Of course, I have to admit that children and schools are interrelated. They receive essential education at school. For instance: We learn history which teaches us politics. Without knowing our past we can't know who we really are. History is a school of life which expands world-view. However I think that to be a good person principally depends on our family. Parents are the ones whom we really want to be like and they are perfect role models for us. We are witnessing how they treat other people and adopt it subconsciously. To give an example, I had a friend at the university who constantly stood me up and eventually betrayed me. I was shocked when I saw that his father was behaving exactly like him. Сonsequently, realized that he was copying his father's behavior. Also according to the survey carried out by BBC, it was discovered that children who see their parents drunk are twice as likely to regularly get drunk themselves.
Having weighed up both sides of the argument, I would say that poor parental supervision raises the likelihood of teenage drinking and etc problems. Parents are the first ones who bear great responsibility before the society. Due to good parents world becomes a better place to live among kind and conscientious adolescents.
Topic:Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
The apple never falls far from the tree seems to be true. The methods of upbringing have always been raising long-standing debates. While some people argue that children must be taught at school to be a good person, some others claim this idea is totally wrong because children spent most of their time at home with their families. Therefore, I too believe that the personality of a child is mainly formed at home and depends on parents.
Of course, I have to admit that children and schools are interrelated. They receive essential education at school. For instance: We learn history which teaches us politics. Without knowing our past we can't know who we really are. History is a school of life which expands world-view. However I think that to be a good person principally depends on our family. Parents are the ones whom we really want to be like and they are perfect role models for us. We are witnessing how they treat other people and adopt it subconsciously. To give an example, I had a friend at the university who constantly stood me up and eventually betrayed me. I was shocked when I saw that his father was behaving exactly like him. Сonsequently, realized that he was copying his father's behavior. Also according to the survey carried out by BBC, it was discovered that children who see their parents drunk are twice as likely to regularly get drunk themselves.
Having weighed up both sides of the argument, I would say that poor parental supervision raises the likelihood of teenage drinking and etc problems. Parents are the first ones who bear great responsibility before the society. Due to good parents world becomes a better place to live among kind and conscientious adolescents.
