Why most big cities are noise-polluted? Discussion

Nowaday, the noise pollution problem is becoming serious while it recieve least concernation. Survering as a murdering hidden, noise pollution is increasingly indifferent to abuses by many people, although its ěnfluence in our lives is extremely dangerous. Big cities are the places recieve most influence by noise-polluted. There are many causes of seriously noise pollution in big cities. But mostly because the main factors: traffic, construction, manufacturing industrial and human activities.

Because of the widespread character, traffic become the biggest threat increases the intensity of noise pollution. with the increasing of transport, traffic congestion in big cities become more severe, the noise coming from the engine is also increasing. Not only that, honk habits, bluff buzzing of traffic participants cause noise pollution.

Big cities is the places which strong developing infrastructure as well construction. Currently, the use of construction machinery is common. This is a significant factor of noise pollution.

Present in the manufacturing industrial, the use of mechinery is considered indispensible. However, due to the short of sense of manufacturer and some industrial zones cause noise pollution level is increasing. Big cities also have many manufactering plants and industrial zones.

The human activities in big cities are very abundant and complicate that contribute to noise pollution. The turning on loudly players also impact negatively on hearing of peaple, especially the discos or bars. This is a factor of noise pollution that is considered the most difficult handle and only rely on people sense mainly.

In coclusion, all those reason explain why most big cities are noise-polluted. Noise effect negatively on hearing and cause sleep disorders as well human cardiovascular disease. Hope that in the future, people would concern about stainded to minimize noise.

concernation. should be reaplaced by "concern{"

all those reasonS

Nowadays, noise pollution is becoming a serious problem in society. However, it has not yet appropriate level of consideration.


.... hey .... what do you mean by this?
You need to include your prompt with your essay for us to provide you with more relevant comments. Without seeing the prompt it is difficult to understand what your prompt expects.

... there are lots of errors here.... grammar, vocabulary and spellings.
manufacturing industry (not industrial)
My advice for you is to write simple clear sentences. Don't crowd your sentences with too many big words. Most of the time, synonyms don't work. They give total different idea when inappropriately used.