Bleached corals in the Pacific have started bouncing bac

The scientists make a research about coral around the island of Kiritimati and proved the coral about 85 percent was dead, 10 percent was sick and bleached, but only 5 per cent was doing okay. It occurred because of hot water phenomenon from El Nino. this is natural warming which sometimes occurred in the Pacific ocean and has the influence to change weather worldwide and also made global warming effect which coral damage in the sea. Meanwhile, the coral species are able to rebound and recover their life, but it still susceptible by El Nino threat, finally need to protect the coral with any natural systems.

Source : New Scientist

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The scientists make a researchabout coral around the island of Kiritimati and proved the coral about 85 percent was dead, 10 percent was sick and bleached, but only 5 per cent was doing okay.

THE SCIENTIST CONDUCT RESEARCH ON .............AND THE RESULT IS..........BUT ONLY 5 PERCENT IS IN GOOD CONDITION.

It occurred because of hot water phenomenon from El Nino. >>> PASSIVE VOICE (S+be+v3) it is occured because.....EL NINO HOT WATER PHENOMENON

... influence to change weather worldwide and also made global warming effect which ... . THIS SENTENCE IS TOO LONG YOU CAN DEVIDE BY 2 SENTENCE. YOU CAN MAKE NEW SENTENCE FROM WHOM I MARKED THE RED ONE.

Meanwhile, the coral SINGULAR NEED VER SINGULAR species are IS able to rebound and...