Car ownership, public transport and environment protection - Ielts2

Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
What are your views?

With the enormous spread of private cars, people find themselves in front of a sensitive problem: should car ownership be restricted? From my perspective, the efforts to control the use of car will face reasonable obstacles; however the control needs to be assumed, at least partly.

Admittedly, it is impossible to completely change people's driving habits. Today, a car is something on which citizens rely heavily. First, it is simply the most comfortable and versatile private vehicle. In contrast with buses and subway trains, which go only to scheduled places and at a scheduled time, a car provides accessibility to a large amount of destinations and opportunity to be independent from the schedule. Furthermore, when it comes to trips between cities, driving private car turns out to be less expensive than using the services of public transportation.

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Hello,
Here are some edits for what you have. A good point to make is that, not only does the pollution caused my cars harm people, but it harms the environment as well.

With the enormous spread of private cars, people find themselves in front of a sensitive problem: should car ownership be restricted? From my perspective, the efforts to control the use of car will face reasonable obstacles; however the control needs to be assumed, at least partly.

In contrast,with buses and subway trains, which go only to scheduled places and at a scheduled time, while a car provides accessibility to a large amount of destinations and the opportunity to be independent from the schedule.

Moreover, scientists have linked the alertness and the disruption of sleeping patterns that citizens experience to the noise pollution produced by horns honking and the sound of working motors.

In order to lighten people's carbon dioxide and noise footprintpollution , the number of cars operated needs to be reduced.

In conclusion, I believe that, although difficult, car ownership should be restricted. In an effort to decrease the number of cars on the streets, governments need to encourage the use of public transportation by developing additional destinations of buses and subway trains and lower ing the prices of tickets.

Hope this helps