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The causes of success in college


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Jul 21, 2021   #1

how to be successful in college?



Many young people often asked themselves that how to achieve their aims and to be successful in college. This essay will describe about two significant factors which resulted in a best performing in university's lives; one planning and time management, the other study habits.

To begin with, students need to perform well your task schedule before starting lectures as it is a contribution to wonderful accomplishments in college. It means that planning time and setting their personal activities clearly are good ways to help them getting successful in college. For example, since young people should make an outline of to do list for the next week, they not only may avoid feeling overwhelming from an enormous of information in class but also do not make confusion of assignments. Moreover, time management has separated efficiently studying time and time for extracurricular activities for students. Due to diligent and discipline personality of students, they may be successful in college.

Additionally, choosing accurately a study attitude also play an important role which leads to completely conquer good results to come. To put it another say that, every student is always a self-motivation person towards with their career path. For instance, they have to respect professors, be a diligent person, also they must understand clearly the top of priority which are focusing on learning and practising many assignments in class. Besides, when they are proactive in studying, it helps them to acquire high academic process easier as well as achievement more and more academic scholarships for moving up in their career ladders. That is the reason why these habits has played a very necessary role which should be in each student.

To sum up, it is obvious that extremely difficult to be successful in college if students lack of skills such as performing well their task schedule, and learning with their self-motivation. As a result, these are two main elements which are the best key to unlock students's future, also allowing them to reach at high places in university's lives.
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Jul 22, 2021   #2
The first sentence of the restatement does not sound like a trophic restatement that was based on a previous statement. Original reason references appear to be missing. Good work on providing the thesis statement though. It shows good comprehension and reasoning skills on the writer's part. The real problem lies in the way the sentencen are presented in the discussion paragraphs.

The writer manages to get his opinion across to the reader somehow. The writer lacks control over his sentence formation and word usage. The presentations are grammatically inaccurate on several counts relating to proper sentence presentation. The writer will do well to not try to write complexsentences yet. Practice simple sentence presentations first and perfect it.


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