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Changes in consumption of margarine, low fat - reduced spreads, and butter between 1981 and 2007



AnnHuynh 1 / -  
May 18, 2021   #1

The graph shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007



The line graph illustrates changes in the per capita consumption of margarine, low fat - reduced spreads, and butter between 1981 and 2007

Overall, it is noticeable that butter was by far the most popular of the three types of spreads for the majority of the 26 - year period. However, a considerable rise can be seen in the consumption of low fat-reduced spreads, with figures eventually surpassing those for consumption.

Between 1981 and 1986, butter consumption rose from around 140grams to a pick of 160 grams per year. During the same period, consumption of margarine stood at 85 grams and decreased significantly. Low fat-reduced spreads were by far the least most popular used.

By 2007, the amount of butter had plummeted to around 50grams, by the consumption of low fat-reduced spreads reached the highest point, at 89grams in 2001 and declined slightly. By contrast, there was a hit the lowest point of 40 grams in the number of margarine.

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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15342  
May 19, 2021   #2
For clarity purposes in the summary, separate the sentence presentations based on topic. The better format would be:

Sen. 1 - Topic and image reference
Sen. 2 - Listing of image sources and measurement reference
Sen. 3 - Years of reference
Sen. 4 - Trending sentence ( optional )

When presenting the summary this way, you show a clear preliminary analysis as applied to the immediately observable and noticeable information. The increased TA score is applied to the complete and understandable presentation of this paragraph. The maximum score boost happens in this section.

There is plenty of room for more analysis of the provided information. By using at least 3 sentences to represent the data, you allow for individualized topic focus. You will show a true comprehension of the data. One explanation per sentence. Do your best to create a grouped discussion for comparison points. Do not lump the topics into a single sentence . This essay needs to be scannable for information. so clear sentence references are a must for the presentation development.

You overlooked the equal points reference in the image. This is the point where the measurements met or crossed paths. Those are also notable reference points in relation to market consumption. While you may discuss any points you wish, the equal points comparison helps show better analysis and in the process, task accuracy.


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