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TASK 1. The changes in the layout of the Woodwards University.


Ra_fhli 22 / 17 8  
Nov 5, 2015   #1
The maps gives breakdown regarding alteration of Woodwards University over the years from 1985 to 2015. Overall, it is important to underline that the number of building these day has a less number, but the area more to be vast compared to construction in 1985.

Looking at the detail, science laboratories in nowadays seem replaced three buildings related to exact science such as physic, chemistry and biology block. Furthermore, Library also has renovated becoming bigger than in 1985 in which it is facilitated by sophisticated technologies, as a consequence from IT Center. In 1985, Cark Park experienced two places, but this day these are demolished and replaced by shuttle bus, as a public transport in that collage.

Today, Woodwards University apparently show a wider place in which in southeast of the map, there is public space with academicians able to enjoy or just for walk around by footpaths area. It is also can be seen that the structure of admin building more efficient than in 1985. The newest frame initially can be drawn is establishment of Lecture Theater in which it connects with three main building.




vangiespen - / 4,137 1449  
Nov 5, 2015   #2
Ramat, your detailed report analysis of the map proves that you not only paid attention to the details in the map, but that you also examined the effects of the renovations throughout the years in relation to the current physical status of the university. This is report that manages to deliver the information that will help inform the reader about the architectural history of the university. However, the lack of connecting words, improper word usage, and the like, have an overall negative effect on the essay. So we need to address those problem points. Please keep the changes I will be making in mind for when you write your next Task 1 essay.


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