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IELTS Task 1 The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media


rishabhk4896 5 / 9  
Feb 22, 2023   #1
The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant



The chart depicts the proportion of people receiving news via various broadcasting channels in a country for 2013, 2015 and 2017. In general, people accessing information through radio and the Internet increased considerably, while television and printed media faced a noticable drop in their veiwers during the period given.

The percentage of people getting news on internet and radio was almost the same in the year 2013, at about 32%. In the case of radio, a small decline of audience in 2015 was noticed, but eventually it witnessed an upward trend in 2017, concluding at around 36%. Internet news readers, however, rose nearly 8% in 2015, and the same reached to just under 70% in 2017.

Television and Newspaper were approximately four-fifths (80%) and two-fifths (42%) of the number of total people in 2013. There was a constant fall in the proportion of newspaper readers, as it fell down to 30% in 2015 and it further dropped to 22% in 2017. Television viewers decreased by roughly 15% in 2015, whereas a growth of 5% was visible in 2017. Television audience ended as same as of internet in 2017 (70%).



Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,830 4781  
Feb 26, 2023   #2
You are prone to using word fillers in your reporting essays. This is not a positive thing when it comes to your writing skills because it shows an inability to directly discuss the topics as you would in a classroom setting where factual statements are a requirement. Students who rely on word fillers are normally seen as weak when it comes to actual thought composition and writing skills. Something that I believe you have a problem with as well because of the lack of direct and factual statements. You are needlessly overextending your reporting paragraphs and directly affecting the concise explanations that the task 1 essay requires. Keep it short and on point.


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