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Children compitition or co-operation?



isqun1 1 / 5  
Sep 23, 2011   #1
Some people think that competition in children should be encouraged others believe that children who are taught to

co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that now a days there is competitive environment for the children in the schools.
There is argument that this competitive behaviour is useful for the students.However,
some people believe that instead of compete children should teach to co-operate
with each others.In my opinion co-operative attitude is more useful.

Children can get many benefits if they help each others .First of all , they can
share experiences in this way they will get more information.They can
discuss and solve each others problems.For example in early days
of my school life i could not go school alone.One of my friends used
to go with me and i used to help help him in Mathematics.

Co-operative behaviour develops leadership qualities among the children.
By this boys and girls learn to work as a team.That can be very useful in
their practical life .Psychologists agree on this point that sports like football
in which children play in a team, are very useful for the character and leadership
development.

On the other hand,competitive environment can be useful to encourage students for
more work .But it has some limitations.It can create stressful environment which
will affect students performance.Competitive environment benefits only those
students which are good in study.Week and average students even do not enter
the competition to stand first in the class.

In a nutshell, co-perativeness among the children is not only useful for their
learning but also for their character.Nevertheless, sense of competition
can motivate some students to do work hard but it negative effect should
not ignored

Zeinab1383 5 / 28  
Sep 23, 2011   #2
Hi

It is true that now a days there is competitive environment for the children in the schools.

Nowadays schools have competitive environment and there are arguments that competitive behavior is useful for the students. while some others believe instead of competing, students should be taught how to cooperate with each other.

First of all , they can share experiences in this way they will get more information.

First of all, in this way, they can share their experiences and get more information.

of my school life iI could not go school alone.One of my friends used
to go with me and i used to help help him in Mathematics.

One of my friends used to accompany me and I ...

By this boys and girls learn to work as a team.That can be very useful in
their practical life .

By this, Children learn to work as a team and it would be very useful for their personal life.


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