Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:In order to become financially responsible adults, children should manage their own money at their young age.
In the modern society, some people believe that it is better for children growing while they attempt to earn their own money at a very early age .As oppose that this behavior do some bad effects on the forming of their personality,especially in their adolescence.Indeed , earning at early age can bring some experience of the real society, which can made a real practise about how to living independent .It may also establish a concept of money in case that the young people will save money in their future life when they knew how hard to earn money by themselves.However, base on these positive sides , I still believe that the bad sides which have effect on children are larger than those seem postive.
First of all ,earning at young age will miss something important in your growing. Although we all heard some stories of great man who earned in their childhood and then became succeeded eventually. Yet it is not a rule adapt for everybody. Most of us are ordinary ones, the adolescent time should be utilized in school in order to get some useful knowledges, and then to decide your own future according to our interests.If you leave school for creating a career or pay much attention on earning , this may ocuppy the time you need to wasting in study. Although Bill Gates leaved Harvard as creating Microsoft at his age of 19, he still admitted in a interview that when he looked backward, the most regretful decision he has ever made in the past is leaving school ,because afterward he has gradually realized his knowledges are so limit that he has read a lot of books for compensating.
Apart from that , another bad effect is that way may give you an impressive conception of money.Aldult 's personality is formed based on what they felt when they were young. If a teenager contact the real world too early, the modes of reality will be embeded in their innocent world and their activities also blend with a certain of intensive purpose.Due to that , their behaviors also has some utilitarian conservation and lack of the spirit of social service.If such kind of utilitarianism is expanding , we can imagine that how cool of the community we lived in the future.
Based on these reasons discussed above , I suggest that young people should not manage their money at their young age instead of doing something meaningful.
please give me some advices about opinion and grammer mistakes and some other aspects , thank you so much.
In the modern society, some people believe that it is better for children growing while they attempt to earn their own money at a very early age .As oppose that this behavior do some bad effects on the forming of their personality,especially in their adolescence.Indeed , earning at early age can bring some experience of the real society, which can made a real practise about how to living independent .It may also establish a concept of money in case that the young people will save money in their future life when they knew how hard to earn money by themselves.However, base on these positive sides , I still believe that the bad sides which have effect on children are larger than those seem postive.
First of all ,earning at young age will miss something important in your growing. Although we all heard some stories of great man who earned in their childhood and then became succeeded eventually. Yet it is not a rule adapt for everybody. Most of us are ordinary ones, the adolescent time should be utilized in school in order to get some useful knowledges, and then to decide your own future according to our interests.If you leave school for creating a career or pay much attention on earning , this may ocuppy the time you need to wasting in study. Although Bill Gates leaved Harvard as creating Microsoft at his age of 19, he still admitted in a interview that when he looked backward, the most regretful decision he has ever made in the past is leaving school ,because afterward he has gradually realized his knowledges are so limit that he has read a lot of books for compensating.
Apart from that , another bad effect is that way may give you an impressive conception of money.Aldult 's personality is formed based on what they felt when they were young. If a teenager contact the real world too early, the modes of reality will be embeded in their innocent world and their activities also blend with a certain of intensive purpose.Due to that , their behaviors also has some utilitarian conservation and lack of the spirit of social service.If such kind of utilitarianism is expanding , we can imagine that how cool of the community we lived in the future.
Based on these reasons discussed above , I suggest that young people should not manage their money at their young age instead of doing something meaningful.
please give me some advices about opinion and grammer mistakes and some other aspects , thank you so much.