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The cinema viewing vigures for all films, in millions



Diazalichsan 3 / 6  
Jan 4, 2017   #1

The popularity of cinemas across the world



The table illustrates the total spectators in four different genre of movies in India, Ireland, New Zealand, and Japan. The main fact that stand out is action movie became the highest figure of all genre, while horror is the latest of all.

Looking at the figures, action genre shows the highest spectator of all genre, with total of 29.9 million viewers, India dominates action movie at 8 million. This was followed by Ireland, New Zealand, and Japan with 7.6, 7.2 and 7.1 respectively.

Turning to another, with total of 15.8 million, horror movie experience the lowest spectators of all genre. Moreover, Japan shows the lowest with only 2.2 million, compared with Ireland being the highest viewers in horror at 6.4, afterwards, it followed by New Zealand at 4.7 million and India at 2.5 million. Meanwhile, from overall perspective, India leads the number of spectators in all genres at 24.5 million in total. This is in contrast to Japan which occupy the lowest total of viewers.


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ayuriska 7 / 12  
Jan 13, 2017   #2
hai @Diazalichsan
i think you should explain bit about other genres like romance and comedy, instead of describing all of the number in action/horor (perhaps you can just pick the highest and lowest)

India is dominated bydominates action
This iswas followed
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thanks and good luck


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