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I closed my eyes and started the chanting. They appeared on the left of my side. Bald headed and simple dressed though they were, their mere presence had a pleasant, powerful aura about them.
"We have been observing, you are loosing the sense of your path". Their deep, clam voices rushed through my vains, blood and peaceful mind.
"It is hard to keep up, my Lords", said I.
"You are a qualified person to be amongst us, Why give up now?"
"I have started forgetting, my Lords". I answered with a feeling of sadness and understanding. I wanted to talk to them, stay with them and, have this conversation for a long time, forever.
"That is your challenge in the everlasting circle of life, trying to remember and never letting go. It is hard, indeed, as we have seen and went through our own destined challenges, we know. But that is the only way. You have come this far, Why the hesitation now? Do not forget ... Remember ..." Their voices faded away with the last few words. Still, the memory of their images remained.
"Yes, my Lords ..." I sounded vigilant, determined yet calm.
They had a message for me, an omen to find my destiny. The very feeling of their existence gave me the strength to look beyond the obvious.
I opened my eyes. The path has changed it's way though life still sings the old song. I smiled at my own thoughts. Time to let go and continue the journey of my destiny, toward the horizon...
thank you...
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I closed my eyes and started the chanting. They appeared on the left of my side. Bald headed and simple dressed though they were, their mere presence had a pleasant, powerful aura about them.
"We have been observing, you are loosing the sense of your path". Their deep, clam voices rushed through my vains, blood and peaceful mind.
"It is hard to keep up, my Lords", said I.
"You are a qualified person to be amongst us, Why give up now?"
"I have started forgetting, my Lords". I answered with a feeling of sadness and understanding. I wanted to talk to them, stay with them and, have this conversation for a long time, forever.
"That is your challenge in the everlasting circle of life, trying to remember and never letting go. It is hard, indeed, as we have seen and went through our own destined challenges, we know. But that is the only way. You have come this far, Why the hesitation now? Do not forget ... Remember ..." Their voices faded away with the last few words. Still, the memory of their images remained.
"Yes, my Lords ..." I sounded vigilant, determined yet calm.
They had a message for me, an omen to find my destiny. The very feeling of their existence gave me the strength to look beyond the obvious.
I opened my eyes. The path has changed it's way though life still sings the old song. I smiled at my own thoughts. Time to let go and continue the journey of my destiny, toward the horizon...