Coffee and tea lovers in Australia - IELTS Academic Writing Part 2 - Cambridge 15 Test 1

people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart provided demonstrates the proportion of beverages such as coffee and tea purchasing and drinking habits in various cities in Australia including Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide as well as Hobart.

In general, residents of five cities seem to like enjoying their drink in the coffee shops and buying instant coffee in the last 4 weeks when both of these trends are higher than the others. Opposite to this, bought fresh coffee in last 28 days holds the last position with the lowest percentage in all cities.

It is obvious that the rate of went to a cafe for a drink in the last 4 weeks in Melbourne is the highest at 64%. Following it are that of Hobart, Sydney, Brisbane, and Adelaide with respective ratios 63,5%, 61%, 55,5%, and 49,5%. These percentages show the differences between the habits of the citizens.

Besides the previous trend, the Hobart people tend to buy instant coffee the most in the last 4 weeks with the rate of 54%. Holding the second position is Brisbane folks when their proportion is 1% lower than Hobart residents. Preceded by the 2 above cities, people in Adelaide, Melbourne, and Sydney have smaller ratios namely from 45.5% to nearly 50%.

The residents of these 5 cities seem not to enjoy fresh coffee in the last 28 days when the ratio of this habit is the lowest compared to the previous ones. In detail, citizens of Brisbane and Adelaide are holding the first and the second position of not buying fresh coffee with the percentage of 34% and 34,5% respectively. In contrast to them, Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart folks tend to enjoy this trend because of the high proportion from 38% to 44%.

Overall, these three habits fluctuate dramatically in five cities. The habit of going out to have a drink seems to be popular when its percentages are all high in 4 cities except Adelaide.

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