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It is common knowledge that time is flying way too fast - time is money


Juliett 1 / -  
Dec 9, 2014   #1
Hello! English is my third language and i am not confident in my knowledge :)
It is common knowledge that time is flying way too fast. Time irreversible, consequently it must be valued. People say that time is money and it's hard to argue with this. Time must be spent reasonably, because lost time is never found again. For example we do not have to spend our time on computer games and internet. Instead, we can do something valuable and important, for instance, to help someone or to read a book. As I noted, time is flying too fast, and life is very short to spend it on trivial issues. Every minute is valuable like money.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Jan 11, 2015   #2
Time is irreversible, and consequently it must be valued.

People say that time is money and it's hard to argue with this. --- This was not an error, but often it's better to omit 'that' in a sentence.

For example we do not have to spend our time on computer games and on the In ternet.

Instead, we can do something valuable and important. Fo r instance, to we can help someone or to read a book.

As I noted, time is flying too fast, and life is very too short to spend it on trivial issues.

: ) Great job! It's more valuable to be multilingual than to have perfect English grammar, anyway.


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