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the percentage of households owned and rented in England
Compare the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The bar chart illustrates the fluctuation of the percentage of owned and rented house in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Overall, the chart indicates that households in owned accommodation gradually increased from 1918 to 2011, while, the percentage of rented house declined.
In more detailed, although the percentage of owned house gradually rose, in 2011, it fell. Moreover, in 1918, it only occupied just over 20% for households in owned accommodation. On the contrary, the percentage of rented house gradually decreased, yet, in 2001, it had a bounce back and started to rise. Additionally, the highest percentage of the rented house was also in 1918. It had more than 70%. Besides, in 1971, the percentage of rented house and owned house was the same. They were both 50 percent.