Task 1- Comparison kind of movies watched in UK and US

The bar chart illustrates the number of film watched in England and Australia in 2001, categorized by US, UK Australian films and others; the line graph describes movie theater entry for thirty years. Overall, the majority films showed in both UK and Australia were US films, while England and Canberra witnessed the highest number in selling ticket in 2005.

US films considerably presented higher rate than others in both country. It represented more than 75% in UK and ten percent below of UK figure in Australia. Next, UK movies reached almost a fifth percent in UK, but less than ten percent screened in Canberra. The Australian films experienced the minority among all categories in its own country. The last category was other films was watched about 17% in Australia and screened five percent in UK.In 2005, UK and Australia showed the highest spectators for cinema, followed by 180 and 100 millions. However, UK and Australia had the same pattern from 1975 to 2005.

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Hello Desty, It is important to note that you have to create at least 3 paragraph by following the rule of grouping. For example, you can differ your body paragraph by the type of information. Here is my suggestion for your writing

I make a modification of your introduction for your consideration:

The bar chart illustrates the number of ...

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of original movies from several countries which were screened in the United Kingdoms and Australia in 2001. Meanwhile, the line graph shows the cinema admissions in millions of both nations between 1975 and 2005. Overall, both UK and Australia extremely attempted to show US films, and both of them witnessed an upward trend over the 30-years period.

Based on that introduction, you can write first body describing bar chart, started with the most interesting figure (US films). I try to separate this from your second paragraph.

US films considerably presented higher rate than others in both country. It represented more than 75% in UK and ten percent below of UK figure in Australia. Next, UK movies reached almost a fifth [five] percent in UK, but less than ten percent screened in Canberra. The Australian films experienced the [became] minority among all categories in its own country. The last category was other films [which] was watched about 17% in Australia and screened five percent in UK .

I think it is quite good for the first body, but if we moving to the next group, your explanation is not enough. Here is it.

In 2005, UK and Australia showed the highest spectators for cinema, followed by 180 and 100 millions. However, UK and Australia had the same pattern from 1975 to 2005.
You have to make balance explanation for those 2 groups.

Good job pal