A comparison and projection of five-decade populations between Yemen and Italy

An information on the aged of the populations of Yemen and Italy

Aging societies in two different countries

A comparison and projection of five-decade populations between Yemen and Italy starts from 2000 to 2050 measured by pie chart. What stands out from the chart is that the 60+ years and 15-59 years in Yemen are projected to increase within fifty years. While the 0-14 years is forecast to decrease. In stark contrast with Italy, the 15-54 years will be a slight decrease while the rests are predicted to upward at the coming years.

A significant increase is envisaged to 15-59 years in Yemen by 2050, a rise from 46.3% to 57.3% in five decades. A group of 60+ years, at the same time is also projected a slight increase in 2050 at 5.7%. compared with Italy, 15-59 years, is forecast to decrease within fifty years. The group 60+ years, what we have seen a slight increase in Yemen, in Italy is envisaged to a dramatic rise from 24. 1 % in 2000 to 342. 3 % by 2050.

Coming to the highest percentages in Yemen, at over a half percent in 2000, the group of 0-14 years is envisaged to the second by the peak year, 13% percent downward. as to Italy, this remains stable in the lowest percentage even though this performs a slight increase in the next fifty years.

An information on the aged of the populations of Yemen and Italy

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