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Cutting Edge Observation: Migration of Bird



WasishaSisha 16 / 18  
Oct 10, 2016   #1
Migration is the common movement of wildlife their reproduce land and their living areas during throughout the years. This essential natural activity affect to evolved species and it can serve the necessary form for breed and grow juvenile. Bird migration is the most fascinating migration for observer in this century.

General pattern of bird migration is moving to higher latitudes for reproduce through the warm monsoon and they will turn back to lower latitudes in non-breeding time. Thus, they can make a nest and feeding the youth in conducive areas with this form of migration. Bird could migrate to a certain place that far away from their origin place. For instance, trans-equatorial migration is the arctic tern. It means breeding in the arctic territory and winters in Antarctic waters. They have to travel as far as 24,000 miles throughout a year during the process of migration. It must not take in long distance for bird migration. There are some species exhibit altitudinal migrations that typical of many grouse species. They are breeding in higher prominence, nearby or the summit of mountains, when they spend the non-breeding time nearby valley and or proximate low country.

The time periods of bird migration are different which based on their track. When they pass through the wide surface of water and other wide land as deserts and mountains, they have to take much longer period to get to their destination. On the other hands, most of birds fly for a narrow time around six to eight hours for every single day and tend to flying only for few hundred miles.

In this days, the observer find out fascinating observations which all migratory birds have a capability in natural navigation to reach their migration spot. Nocturnal migrants are tend to flying at night and rely on to stars for their navigational; In contrast, Diurnal migrants are tend to traveling during the day and make the sun to be their sign.

MonkeyD_Saolo 2 / 4  
Oct 10, 2016   #2
hi @WasishaSisha
i have little bit suggestion to make better your essay. is it ok right ?

This essential natural activity affect to evolved ( you have to write down V1 namely EVOLVE due to the fact that the end of "to" it must be V1) species and it can (you can reduce the word, it is ok to write just and serve ..... because you use conjunction and) serve the necessary form for ...

Nocturnal migrants are tend (tend is categorized class word VERB you should erase the aux "are") to flying (it must FLY because you use to, and the end of t "to" is V1) at night and rely on to stars


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