It's debated whether an individual should always tell the truth at any time

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most necessary in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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It is vastly debated whether an individual should always tell the truth at any time getting along with people. The speaker put a positive statement on this topic. Having meditated this topic, however, I find there is defects in the speaker's statement and I hold a different view towards the topic.

It is a truth widely acknowledged that cheating when engaging in social activities is harmful to relationship between people. For example, there is an old story telling that a boy, who consecutively lied three times to the people living with him at the same village, eventually was eaten by a wolf. What we can learn from the story is how important honest is in our daily life. One without honest will get no help from the people surrounded him and finally hurt himself/herself. Briefly, it is essential for one to be honest to other people.

However, to be honest does not mean to tell the truth all the time as they are of different concepts. Also sometimes in some situations it is not appropriate to tell the truth. We need to tell a white lie when come across some events like we meet someone hospitalized at a hospital. At that time, a white lie may strengthen the illness man and offer him the hope to prevail the disease though it is a lie. This is what doctors often do to save more lives.

There is a point should never be ignored that telling the truth to ones that have evil ideas to you can put yourself into danger. It is easily recalled that every year there are a multitude of crimes worldwide committed by criminals who take in ignorant people. The people who are oblivious of the danger of telling the truth all the time and targeted by the criminals may suffer from losing their wealth, even their health and lives.

Consequently, we can safely conclude that one should be honest to kindhearted people as well as learn when one can tell the truth and when cannot tell it instead of telling it always. Only by this way can we be welcomed and guarantee the security of our health and wealth.

Hi Lansium
I have many suggestions for you. I hope it will help you to develop your writing skill.

Having meditated this topic, however, I find there is ... ----> you can use complete sentence before put howefer on the next sentence
However, to be honest does not mean to tell ... ----> However usually used on second sentence. You can use although or even tough for opening.

Also sometimes ----> On the other hand, ......
Only by this way can we be welcomed ... ----> We are welcome and guarantee the security

tyar32

hallo Lansium

I find there is defects
you should put a singular noun or change is into are
... there is a defect ... or ... there are defects

a truth widely acknowledged
i think it should be it is widely an acknowledged truth
it should be better to put an adverb before or after noun phrase but do not put it in the middle of them

when engaging in social activities is harmful to relationship between people

Only by this way can we be welcomed and
.... we can guarantee the security of our health and wealth.

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