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Describe a memorable celebration that I never forget


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Mar 10, 2021   #1

Tet holiday



I am going to talk about the celebration that I never forget. It is the Tet holiday that is a meaningful celebration for everyone to welcome a new year full of peace and happiness. My family prepared for the new year by cooking special holiday foods and cleaning our house. During Tet, we practiced some customs such as ancestral worship, wishing new year's greetings, giving lucky money to children. Besides, my family had a small party on the last days of the year. In that precious time, most family members are fully present. Tet holiday becomes interesting because we get to participate in exciting activities together and enjoy typical dishes. The Lunar New Year is the happiest time of the year when I'm with my family. And that is why it is memorable to me
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Mar 10, 2021   #2
The use of simple English in this presentation is good. The simplicity of your language presentation makes the topic easy to understand. However, there is a missing discussion point. Aside from the vivid description of the event, you should also be referring to some instances or reasons that make the Lunar New Year a memorable celebration for you. What is the personal reason? The description you gave could actually apply to any festival, any family, and any person describing an event. You need to make the reason for its memorable status stand out based on a personal memory or reason for it. Right now, I understand what the festival is all about, but not why these series of events would make the celebration memorable for you.


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