"Describe a person that inspires you in your career path". Write approximately 150 words.

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V... H., who is one of my friends and everyone call ViHa, motivates me to choose my future career. From head to foot, he is not so good-looking but extraordinary. He is rather portly with the weather-beaten complexion. He has a big round face and a flat nose. He wears a pair of nice blue plastic glasses to cover his neither too big nor too small, brown eyes. His hairstyle is crew-cut with the short wavy black hair. The most attractive point he has is a bright, charming smile.

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hello... I enjoyed read your descriptive text above.
I just realized that you wrote 166 words as well. Good job!
because I myself experienced in writing assignment could not control very well to have limit the words number given.
I also got some new vocabularies of your paragraph and it enhanced my knowledge. Thank you.
Keep spirit up buddy!