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Develop countries have created many environmental problems in the world; global warming (IELTS)


Anfalia 40 / 56 23  
Mar 25, 2015   #1
Develop countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming.
What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?


Environmental problem always be a unique topic in this world. For this reason, global warming is estimated to increase significantly as a result of industrialized in many developing countries. However, the danger of this problem can be tackled by several measurements which could be done by government and individual.

A hustle and bustle of human activities is a major [...]
nazmarta 2 / 2  
Mar 25, 2015   #2
Environmental problems would always be a unique topic in this world. For this reason, global warming is estimated to increase significantly as a result of industrialization in many developing countries. However, the danger of this problem can be tackled by several measurements which could be done by governments and individuals.

A hustle and bustle of human activities is a major reason of the rise of greenhouse gases which trap heat from the sun. A research study has shown that the number of cars (insert the number here) that people in developed countries such as America and in developing countries such as Indonesia produce the amount of gas emissions and exhaust fumes. These gases will increase in global temperatures impact to global warming.

It is undeniable that global warming has a significant impact on our planet. Initially, rising temperature causes melting of polar ice caps, and this affects to rise in sea levels. Research studies in Cambridge University have examined that almost half of polar ice caps in Antarctica have melted, and sea levels in ocean are twice higher compared to previous years. Consequently, earth is threated by more extreme weather conditions.

Admittedly, global warming problem can be solved by some measurements. Firstly, government could introduce law emissions for factories. For pragmatic instance, some factories in Singapore should invest annually in renewable energy from solar, wind or water power that they would use regularly. Also, government could impose "green taxes" on drivers and airlines companies because they produce more pollution. While government probably enables to take some measurements, individuals should also try to be greener by reducing their habits of using car every time, and take fewer flights for holidays.

In conclusion, the danger of environmental problems enables people to take some consideration to solve it. However, it is hard to change and predict the future of our environment when there are many people still neglecting environmental problems. Therefore, this earth will be worse in the future and unable people to live comfortably.

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