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The diagram illustrates how electricity is produced by using water



vhag nguyen 1 / -  
Aug 31, 2019   #1

The diagram shows the process of using water to produce electricity



The diagram illustrates how electricity is produced by using water. This process of producing electricity involves in natural resources and human-built equipment.

First of all, the sun energy evaporates water from the sea. The evaporated water forms to clouds. The rainwater is stored in the reservoir and controlled by a valve. Once the valve is opened, the water current revolves turbine to generate electricity. Simultaneously, the water is pumped back to the reservoir from the turbine. After that electric current is transferred from high voltage cables to main transformer station. The transformer station delivers electricity to residential areas such as hospitals and schools through underground cables.

Overall, the illustration shows that the process of hydro - electric power generation consists of two main stages such as water evaporation and accumulating electricity in the transformer station.


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phlorem 1 / 6  
Sep 6, 2019   #2
Vhag, No prompt was given in this write up, so i couldn't really say if you are trying to educate us or you needed us to assess the write up.

However, This looks like a summary of hydro electric power generation and in my opinion the write up looks a bit ordinary. you can improve on it. Most especially telling us the working principles of the turbine which is very key to electric generation


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