Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organisation. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages?
Writing Task 2, Unit 6C, Page 64
Over the time, some young adults have decided to develop their future career after graduating from a school or a universtiy by becoming an enterpreneur instead of an employee. Although there is a drawback to start up business, I believe that the advantage domintaes the disadvantage.
Some people say that the main disadvantage to create own store is too risky. The enterpreneur has many competitors in the field which sometimes they has better idea to attract more cosumers than the other. For example, based on a recent graph from Local Business Statistical Data in Jakarta, shows that over 65% stores have been surviving to increase consumers, which are more interest to the newest local business that provide convenient places or high qualitiy in products. As a consequence, one by one, the business starts getting bankrupt and being replaced with the newest one. So, this factor has made people hesitate to build their own business.
However, others who have more guts to try new experience, will get more benefits from the business. The main one is getting higher income than another. People who work for a company will have stable income and only increase to a particular amount if they have many experience. Meanwhile, an enterpreneur has earn more money in the earlier age. moreover, they can create a job opportunity to inexperience people who have been rejected by a company. Aslo, they have much more flexible time to gather with another colleague and discuss about new innovation to keep maintaining the business.
Overall, I suggest that the advantage of being an enterpreneur is greater than the disadvantage. Although the risk rate is higher than becoming an employee, they can reach more profit in early stage, help people to find a job, and have more time. (295 words)
Writing Task 2, Unit 6C, Page 64
Over the time, some young adults have decided to develop their future career after graduating from a school or a universtiy by becoming an enterpreneur instead of an employee. Although there is a drawback to start up business, I believe that the advantage domintaes the disadvantage.
Some people say that the main disadvantage to create own store is too risky. The enterpreneur has many competitors in the field which sometimes they has better idea to attract more cosumers than the other. For example, based on a recent graph from Local Business Statistical Data in Jakarta, shows that over 65% stores have been surviving to increase consumers, which are more interest to the newest local business that provide convenient places or high qualitiy in products. As a consequence, one by one, the business starts getting bankrupt and being replaced with the newest one. So, this factor has made people hesitate to build their own business.
However, others who have more guts to try new experience, will get more benefits from the business. The main one is getting higher income than another. People who work for a company will have stable income and only increase to a particular amount if they have many experience. Meanwhile, an enterpreneur has earn more money in the earlier age. moreover, they can create a job opportunity to inexperience people who have been rejected by a company. Aslo, they have much more flexible time to gather with another colleague and discuss about new innovation to keep maintaining the business.
Overall, I suggest that the advantage of being an enterpreneur is greater than the disadvantage. Although the risk rate is higher than becoming an employee, they can reach more profit in early stage, help people to find a job, and have more time. (295 words)
