Donald Trump's Team Won't 'Rule Out' and not Planning to Create a Muslim Registry
The establishing of registry based on religion, particularly Muslim, wouldn't go to rule out and not planning on it too, but the Donald Trump's team will say to some people who radicalized have to be prevented from coming into the US country. Moreover, The "extreme vetting" in Trump campaign will always defense, and it is one reason the creation of Muslim registry based on the National Security Entry-Exit Registration system
Source : Time
hi yurikeyuri, these are my thought towards your summary
firstly, i think your summary not contains the main information the article served. it would be better if you put in an effort to complete the information.
The establishingestablishment of registry based (...) Muslim, wouldn't(do not abbreviate it) go to rule out and ...
[ the establishment of religion policy, particularly Muslim, is not either becoming the rule or planned yet, but Trump's team will discuss to ... ]
..., and it is one reason of the creation of Muslim ...[Moreover, the "extreme vetting" in Trump campaign which will always be defense become a reason of the creation of Muslim Registry...]
thank you
"but the Donald Trump's team will say to ..."
--->
"but the Donald Trump's team say people who have radicalized will be prevented from coming into the U.S."
The writing is so confusing I couldn't even make sense, let alone fixing it (e.g."wouldn't go to rule out and not planning on it too" --- make no sense to me).
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