The establishing of registry based on religion, particularly Muslim, wouldn't go to rule out and not planning on it too, but the Donald Trump's team will say to some people who radicalized have to be prevented from coming into the US country. Moreover, The "extreme vetting" in Trump campaign will always defense, and it is one reason the creation of Muslim registry based on the National Security Entry-Exit Registration system
Source : Time
hi yurikeyuri, these are my thought towards your summary
firstly, i think your summary not contains the main information the article served. it would be better if you put in an effort to complete the information.
The establishingestablishment of registry based (...) Muslim, wouldn't(do not abbreviate it) go to rule out and ...
[ the establishment of religion policy, particularly Muslim, is not either becoming the rule or planned yet, but Trump's team will discuss to ... ]
..., and it is one reason of the creation of Muslim ...[Moreover, the "extreme vetting" in Trump campaign which will always be defense become a reason of the creation of Muslim Registry...]
thank you
hai yuri
it is a good summary
i have some suggestions for you
hope it helps
..., particularly Muslim, wouldn'twould not go to the rule out and not planning on it too as well,
... say to some people who radicalized have to be ...
... Trump campaign will always defensebe protected , and
it is the reason that the creation of Muslim's enrollment based on the (...) System.
thanks
"but the Donald Trump's team will say to ..."
--->
"but the Donald Trump's team say people who have radicalized will be prevented from coming into the U.S."
The writing is so confusing I couldn't even make sense, let alone fixing it (e.g."wouldn't go to rule out and not planning on it too" --- make no sense to me).
Here is my rewrite of the first sentence based on my own understanding/guess:
"The establishing of registry based on religion, particularly Muslim, wouldn't go to ..."
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"Donald Trump's team neither rules out nor confirms the establishment of registry based on religion, particularly Muslim, but they say that people who have radicalized will be prevented from coming into the U.S."
