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( WRITING TASK 1 DOUBLE CHARTS) THE NUMBER OF FOREIGN TOURISTS VISITING XCOUNTRY IN 2019 AND 2020:..


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May 15, 2024   #1
The given bar chart contains information about how many people in other countries visiting XCountry between 2007 and 2008. The table illustrates how much money that various businesses earn each year in XCountry from 2007 to 2008.

Overall, tourists from all nations decreased although the main sources of foreign tourists were Australia, China, and Japan. In addition, the annual income of all industries dropped with the money of the transportation was the lowest in both years

In further details, the number of tourists from Europe, the United States, and Canada raging from around 2,200,000 to approximately 2,300,000 in 2007. In the following year, both data experienced a significant drop to 1,000,000 for Europe and 200,000 for Canada and the United States. Turning to the statistics of Australia, China, and Japan, it started at 2,700,000 and 3,000,000 in the aforementioned order before witnessing a gradual decline to 2,800,000 and 2,000,000 in 2008.

Regarding the income in XCountry, in 2007, hotels and resorts earned $3.5 million, higher than $2.4 million of restaurants, bar, and souvenir shops, following by tour guides, small vendors, and other services ( 1.4 ) and transportation and travel agent ( 1.3 ). In the next year, with the exception of tour services ,all of the industries dropped dramatically to $0.5 million for accomodations, $1.2 million for restaurants, with the transportation ( 0.4 ). The services about tour fell marginally to $ 1.1 million

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May 17, 2024   #2
The task has too many words written. You might be able to complete this during the actual test, but you will use more than 20 minutes and you will cut into the task 2 writing time. Remember that you are going to have to time yourself during the actual test. A timer will not be provided. You need to know exactly how many words you can write and how fast you can write within the given time frame. I suggest that you use a timer next time just to get yourself used to your actual writing process and abilities. You cannot spend too much time analyzing the presentation, you should present a more concise report so that you will finish within 20 minutes.


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