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There's is no doubt that learning a second language is important for people - bilingual brain merits



ryan31 65 / 89  
Nov 16, 2016   #1
Multilanguage is work differently compared than mono language. There are two parts when using English as main language consist of active and passive. In the active parts, containing speaking and writing, while the passive parts has listening and reading. For instance, Gabriela who has two languages that are English and Spanish. She utilize English in school whereas Spanish used in the home and also to talk with friends. Children have tendency easily to learn about rather than adults. As a result, multilanguage has remarkable benefits for children and also can make more active, complex, healthy. This is no doubt that learning second language is important for people and there is no word late to learn about english since a little exercise can make it perfect.

m7mdbsheer 6 / 7  
Nov 16, 2016   #2
Hi Ryan, here are some suggestions to improve this piece of writing:
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