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Does the Earth Melt? The pervasive ramification of climate change



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Dec 5, 2021   #1

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While present research appeared void about planet Earth itself melting. The visible attestation of polar ice melting is greatly reported by researchers and scientists. The probable blame goes to climate change. According to National Geographic, climatic change generates long-term periods in global or regional climate patterns. The release of greenhouse gases is what caused rapid climate change per Foote's (1856) experiment. According to NASA, greenhouse gases absorb and trap energy, transmitting it into our atmosphere. In one statistic provided by Our World in Data (OWID), the world still emits 36.44 billion tons of annual CO2. The associated impacts are immensely evident. In one report of the World Meteorological Organization (WMO), extreme heatwaves and wild fires manifests during the 2015-2019 period. The augmentation affects all continents, leading unnatural threshold of new national temperature records. This equals how ice sheets in Antarctica are losing, resulting to liquefy. Whilst climate change continues to instigate ice glaciers melting faster, this permits to influence the behavioral crust of the Earth. In Coulson's (2021) research, they communicated the effects of why ice glaciers continue to melt and began to study the plate tectonics' movement in Antarctica. "In some parts of Antarctica, for example, the rebounding of the crust is changing the slope of the bedrock under the ice sheet, and that can affect the ice dynamics," said Coulson, who collaborated in the lab of Jerry Mitrovica, the Frank B. Baird, Jr. Professor of Science. While we cannot deny how the Earth's climate change is a global issue, some solutions are up to debate. But the cause of climate change is pointed towards humans. The figures below illustrate relative metrics that are supplementary reviewed.

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Dec 5, 2021   #2
While present research appeared void about planet Earth itself melting. The visible

There is something missing in the reference point of the first paragraph. It does not make any sense. Maybe you accidentally started a new sentence when it was supposed to be a continous thought presentation at that point? Whatever it is, you have to fix that problem to create some sense of logic and reasoning in that part of the presentation.

You are writing a an overview, also known as a summary, or, in higher academic circles, an abstract. This is a short form of the actual presentation. No citations, no quotes, no sourced information should be presented in the overview/summary/abstract. Rather than overview, this may be considered a cut and paste of a whole section of the research paper instead. You need to develop an accurate summary of your overall paper instead. Focus on:

- The topic
- The reason
- Research results based on how the research of survey was performed
- Potential solution or conclusion

These are the parts that create an accurate overview/summary.


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