Summary : drawing that show the beauty and fragility of earth
The presented video in TED.COM lectured by Zaria Forman highlights about drawing that show the beauty and fragility of earth. Zaria Forman uses a drawing method to convey her idea about how to protect and preserve earth due to climate change. According to behavioral psychology study, she concluded that art is the best method to generate people making decisions and taking actions. She and her mother conducted their first expedition to Greenland in 2012. They captured a great deal of pictures that represented the power and the fragility of landscape. During their journey, they found that the melting of Greenland was one of the largest contributing factor to raise the sea levels. Subsequently, she made another expedition to Maldives in 2013 as the lowest-lying islands. While she was there, she collected a number of images and an inspiration for drawing of waves on the coast that could be entirely underwater within century. Maldives and Greenland were the representation islands to reveal the severe impact of global warming.
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