An Easy Brand New Approach for Gardeners

This summary is extracted from an article published on readitenglish.com/read/rcXgoi# . Its original title is Grow it yourself : Aquaponics

A brand new method in farming field is appeared to be true, Aquaponics. It is one way to farm plants by combining aquaculture and hydroponics system. Hence, the waste water from fish farming is utilized to grow organic foods owing to the fact that the required chemical fertilizer is found on the fish waste. It is needless to say that by using this kind of approach, everyone who settle in a poor soil can do farming as well since the plants only need one out of ten amount of water of what ordinary plants need. This methodology is overwhelmingly natural as no pesticide is involved. Then the other merits goes to the reduction of climate change, groundwater pollution and overfishing.

Aquaponics is completely easy to be done due to gardeners only need to feed their plants once a day without need to think about watering time. For all people who are interested in applying it can go to visit the inventor's, Ms. Bernstein's, video on her Youtube channel, or read her published book.

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