Yes, if the first part would be a complete sentence on it's own, then you separate the 2 halves of the compound sentence with a comma. Look at Strunk and White for that one.
Ana, maybe they should get rid of me and give you my moderator position!
achievements, key skills and attributes, education, and where you are right now.
I am a girl, who lives in a busy city that never sleeps called Tokyo. I am always surrounded by neon lights, tall buildings and trends; I am definitely a city girl. I attended the International School of Sacred Heart in Tokyo from third grade. I could not speak any English at all but I eventually improved so This part does not answer the question.
I am bilingual now. During my nine years of a student life at an international school, I am confident to .... this part is better!
To make it short, I am stubborn.---Haha, clever...
3. What is your vision for your brand? What do you envision for your career?
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want my brand to be outstanding and shining. No no, these are just simple adjectives. You need to have a plan. You need to know what you want to accomplish in this world. Do you know what I mean? Make a plan.
I am not sure what kind of car I am today but if I succeed to become myself that I want to be in the future then, I know what kind of car I would to be in the future: Tesla Motors. -----This is a job for a colon, not a semi-colon.
There are several reasons why I would be Tesla. Tesla is famous for their electronic cars. Their car is eco-friendly because they run with zero emission. For a Tesla car, driving is its ---Excellent! Great idea...