Coursework task for GCSE English: write an extended piece arguing a topic of your choice
Co-Educaitonal Schooling Systems...
The idea of integrating concepts of 'the future' into the conclusion is proving difficult...
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In summation, I have clearly proven the effectiveness of co-educational schooling and that it is a more viable educational system over single-sexed schooling. It has been proven that co-educational schooling better prepares students for life in a diverse society, that co-educational institutes do not compromise the academic achievement of students, and that co-educational schools aid in developing relationships and encourage a greater sense of equality among students. I can understand that some of you may still chose to revert to your original views of perceiving single-sex schools as traditionally effective and instilling high academic attainment; yet, I have shown you that such institutes do not aid learning in students who do not conform to the stereotypical normalities associated with their gender and do address post-education life. {Therefore, I reaffirm that co-education is, and will continue being, the ideal learning mechanism to raise successful and accepting individuals for the modern workforce. //in[to] the future. //}
{Therefore, I reaffirm that co-education is, and will continue being, the ideal learning mechanism to raise successful and accepting individuals for the future workforce.}
{Therefore, I reaffirm that co-education is, and will continue being, the ideal learning mechanism to raise successful and accepting individuals in the future.}
{Therefore, I reaffirm that co-education is, and will continue being, the ideal learning mechanism to raise successful and accepting individuals for the workforce in the future.}
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Co-Educaitonal Schooling Systems...
The idea of integrating concepts of 'the future' into the conclusion is proving difficult...
Please feel free to suggest other edits! Thank you!
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In summation, I have clearly proven the effectiveness of co-educational schooling and that it is a more viable educational system over single-sexed schooling. It has been proven that co-educational schooling better prepares students for life in a diverse society, that co-educational institutes do not compromise the academic achievement of students, and that co-educational schools aid in developing relationships and encourage a greater sense of equality among students. I can understand that some of you may still chose to revert to your original views of perceiving single-sex schools as traditionally effective and instilling high academic attainment; yet, I have shown you that such institutes do not aid learning in students who do not conform to the stereotypical normalities associated with their gender and do address post-education life. {Therefore, I reaffirm that co-education is, and will continue being, the ideal learning mechanism to raise successful and accepting individuals for the modern workforce. //in[to] the future. //}
{Therefore, I reaffirm that co-education is, and will continue being, the ideal learning mechanism to raise successful and accepting individuals for the future workforce.}
{Therefore, I reaffirm that co-education is, and will continue being, the ideal learning mechanism to raise successful and accepting individuals in the future.}
{Therefore, I reaffirm that co-education is, and will continue being, the ideal learning mechanism to raise successful and accepting individuals for the workforce in the future.}
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