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EIKEN's ESSAY (should endangered species be protected?)


mikimousekiki 1 / 1  
May 24, 2012   #1
Should be endangered species protected ?

It is often pointed by some ecology experts that we should promote more awareness movements for the protection of endangered species,
I agree with this idea for the three following reasons.

Firstly, protecting one species lead to protecting the entire ecosystem.
The extinction of one species will have a huge impact on some other species and gradually on human beings at the top of the food chain.

After all, protecting various species protect human beings.

Secondly, plants and animals hold priceless value and bring human beings a lot of benefits in terms of medicinal, agricultural, ecological, commercial,
aesthetic,and recreational value. Our life will be chaotic without those plants and animals.
we have to protect endangered species so that future generations will enjoy their presence and value.

Finally, human beings have to compensate for the extinction of endangered species.
We all have destroyed the forests so that we can build factories or farms.
On top of that, we need more places where we can live in because the number of population on earth has been incredibly rising.

In conclusion, I believe that endangered species should be protected by imposing stricter regulation on poaching and illegally trading of animals and plants.

My important exam is approaching... I'm sort of nervous.
lananh87512 2 / 3  
May 24, 2012   #3
It is often pointed by some ecology experts that we should promote more awareness movements for the protection of endangered species,
I (vigorously) agree with this idea (by dint of its positive influences on ecosystem, human being and humanity) for the three following reasons.
OP mikimousekiki 1 / 1  
May 24, 2012   #4
Thank you!
I try to this phrase " I (vigorously or totally) agree with this idea..."
And, I haven't ever heard that phrase "by dint of "... it's interesting.
lananh87512 2 / 3  
May 25, 2012   #5
Positive impacts: by dint of, thanks to,...
Negative impacts: owing to, due to,...
Neutral impacts: because of, for the sake of something,...


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