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IELTS Task 1: English and French Teachers Who Apply to Teach Regularly in Ontario



fahmisadja 33 / 33  
Nov 14, 2015   #1
The line graph illustrates the percentage of English and French teachers who apply to teach regularly in Ontario over a six-year period. Overall, at the beginning of the period, it can be seen that while both of the language teachers stood the same level at around 70%, French teachers had a stable change and greater than other which hit a low in the end of the time frame.

According to the data, in 2002 French teachers reached a trough of approximately 50% and rose steadily to almost 70% in the following next year. However, English teachers significantly decreased to 40% from 2001 to 2003. Then, both of them showed the different trend in the last four-year period.

In 2005, A gradual increase of 70% was revealed by persons-in-charge in French, and it rose slowly again more than 70% in 2007. In contrast, the other dropped to the lowest level less than 30% in the end of time whereas it had been slightly growing for two years at more than 40% between 2003 and 2005.


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eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1170  
Nov 14, 2015   #2
both of the language teachers stood the same level at around 70%

Initially, teachers of both languages had approximately a 70% success rate in finding jobs.

According to the data, in 2002 French teachers reached a trough of approximately 50% and rose steadily to almost 70% in the following next year. However, English teachers significantly decreased to 40% from 2001 to 2003. Then, both of them showed the different trend in the last four-year period

As per the data, French teachers were more successful than the English ones. The recruitment for French teachers fell by approximately 50%, but then rebounded gradually to virtually 70% in the following year. This is in a stark contrast to the figure for English teachers decreasing significantly from above 70% to 40% between 2001 and 2003, a decline of about 30% in 2 years.


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