English teachers wasn't as much needed as the French ones in Ontario

The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph gives the information about language teachers who graduated a year before recruited in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. Overall, teachers who taught French increased slightly from 2001 to 2007 but, there was a downward trend of English language teachers

From 2001 to 2002 there was a sharp fell of 20 percent. In 2003, the number of French teachers increased slightly to 68 percent. Between 2003 to 2006 the number of French language teachers remained steady from 68 percent to around 65 percent. In the last year, there was a sudden rose by 10 percent of French teachers graduated

Between 2001 and 2003, the percentage of first-year teacher who taught English went down dramatically by 35 percent. From 2003 to 2005 there was a slight rose to 45 percent. By the following years, the percentage of English teachers who graduated went down to above 30 percent. In 2007, it fell again to under 30 percent. (156w)

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The line graph gives the information about (...)based on subject .
... French increased slightly from 2001 to 2007 but, there was a downward ...

From 2001 to 2002 there was a sharp fell of20 percent.
... increased slightly to 68 percen t.
... 68 percent to around65 percent .
... a sudden rose by 10 percent of French teachers graduated

Between 2001 and 2003 , the percentage of (...) down dramatically by35 percent . From 2003 to 2005 there was a slight rose to45 percent.
... went down to above 30 percent . In 2007, it fell again to under 30 percent. (156w)

percent==> may you can change it with other word to make it to be variant
example==> 75%= three-quarter

from ... to ==> avoid repetition
From 2003 to 2005 = during 2 years