Enrolling in UEL university with IELTS certificates

WRITING TASK 1
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The bar chart below presents the number of students enrolling in UEL university (Ho Chi Minh city) using their IELTS certificates from 2020 to 2024.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart illustrates the changes in the number of university enrolments with band 7+ IELTS certificates. Data was recorded in UEL university between 2020 and 2024.

Overall, it is notable that all the figures showed similar upward trends over the surveyed period. Additionally, band 7 was the most popular score among those enrolling at this university.

In 2020, the number of students enrolling in UEL university with IELTS certificates was relatively low. Band 7 accounted for the highest figure with 14 students, almost double the number of students achieving band 7.5. Students had band 8 IELTS was relatively fewer, numbering just 2.

From that point on, there was a dramatic growth in the figure for Band 7 students, increasing to 489 students in the final year of the period. Similarly, Band 7.5 enrolments saw a rapid rise, reaching 295 students in 2024. The period also witnessed a significant increase in the figure for Band 8, with 74 students at the end of the period. Meanwhile, a minority of students enrolling in UEL university achieved a band 8.5, remaining unchanged at 5 from 2023 to 2024.

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Sorry for that as I uploaded a seemingly unsafe link here! Sorry for that carelessness!

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