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The holiday of a liftetime
Last year I had a big chance to travel around the world with my friend as a honeymoon. The way took a hundred days, we tried every means of transport, saw a lot of different countries in Europa, America and Asia.
The worst experince that I have from the way was in Cuba.The political regime is really strict. I was shocked but I can a bit help to people, which live here. We gave them money and some food. On the other hand nature was beautiful. So clean and unspoiled from people.
When I was younger I wanted to go to Maldives always. Even though I can relaxed and live in a hotel. I didn't forget memories from Cuba, they were memorably.
The hundredth day I can turn back and realise that I helped to people, get to know new countries and their culture. It was a holiday I will never forget.
Thank you :-)
The holiday of a liftetime
Last year I had a big chance to travel around the world with my friend as a honeymoon. The way took a hundred days, we tried every means of transport, saw a lot of different countries in Europa, America and Asia.
The worst experince that I have from the way was in Cuba.The political regime is really strict. I was shocked but I can a bit help to people, which live here. We gave them money and some food. On the other hand nature was beautiful. So clean and unspoiled from people.
When I was younger I wanted to go to Maldives always. Even though I can relaxed and live in a hotel. I didn't forget memories from Cuba, they were memorably.
The hundredth day I can turn back and realise that I helped to people, get to know new countries and their culture. It was a holiday I will never forget.
Thank you :-)