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Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life. Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
However, automobiles have an important effect on lifestyle as an comfortable vehicle, but as far as I am concerned about the negative effect of using this technology on quality of our life. Pollution, noisiness, and accidents are most important problems caused by cars, which affect both human and environment.
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Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life. Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
However, automobiles have an important effect on lifestyle as an comfortable vehicle, but as far as I am concerned about the negative effect of using this technology on quality of our life. Pollution, noisiness, and accidents are most important problems caused by cars, which affect both human and environment.
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