How many exchange students from universities between Europe and Australia - IELTS 1

The tables illustrate how many exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia and Australia to Europe in two years 2007 and 2009 in 5 nations.
Overall, while the total number of exchange students from Europe increased dramatically, that of from Australia remained stable over the year. And France had the highest number of students attending to exchange programme in the survey.

In the left table, in 2007, the number of students from France was 61, which was nearly twice as much as that of Sweden, The UK with 32 and 31 respectively. In 2009, the number of exchange students from France to Australia was 60, compared to that of Swenden was 43. The number of German students engaged in exchange programme was 27 in 2007, which was the lowest number in the survey, however, in 2009 this figure was 63, holding the first rank in 5 nations in Europe. The number of students taking part in the exchange programme from The Netherland to Australia remained unchanged in both years 2007 and 2009 with 36.

In the right table, in 2007, the numbers of students from France and Germany were 37 and 18, these figures rose significantly in 2009 with 58 and 26 correspondingly. The figures for students from Swenden, The UK and The Netherlands dropped slightly, ranging from 33 in 2007 to 18 in 2009.IELTS task 1IELTS task 1IELTS task 1IELTS task 1

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The trending statement is a bit confusing to read. The lack of reference to what years are being indicated contributed to the lack of understanding of the provided information. It is important that the 4 sentence trending statement be clear next time. It has to refer to the high and low of each year, and the year must be indicated from the start.


The reader does not have access to the image so referencing the position of the image on the page is not necessary. It is however, necessary that you refer to the year indicated as the anchor sentence or subject sentence at the start of the paragraph.

You have made a good attempt at describing the image. It was actually a good job had it not been for the problems I indicated in the preceding observation paragraphs.