hi Anfalia, I would like to discuss your writing here, while I improve my analyzing skill so as to increase my writing skill.
There are several comments, suggestions, and question for your writing.
A prominent task
I comprehensively understand that you want to paraphrase " important" to be "prominent", but I am afraid that it is inappropriate and is not collocate with a noun "task". Therefore, I suggest you to change it to fundamental/crucial/primary/principal
. What's more, "of" is inappropriate preposition so that you can use "in" as a preposition of "task".
For this personal perspective
I am afraid that this expression is uncommon inasmuch as "for" is not collocate with perspective. it will be better if "from this personal perspective"
of the number both male and female scholars
why you use "an" for equivalence? do not you think that "equivalence" is uncountable ?. Moreover, "of" is not collocate, so it should be "between"
to be true
for some extent
I do not think that for is collocate, so I think it should be "to be true to some extent"
prominent aspects to conscious choose selectively
1.) Why you favor to use prominent as paraphrase of "important"? I am afraid that it is not collocate with "aspect". Have you checked your collocation dictionary, how to use prominent appropriately? I suggest you to check it whereas I have been checking it regularly.
2.) Are you sure to put an adjective "conscious" prior to verb "choose" ? as far as I am concern, a verb is not commonly followed by an adjective.
this is my suggestion "two fundamental aspects to (consciously) choose selectively..."
It dues to female students are more likely to be shy and cannot expose their understanding of subjects all out when it comes to the majority of male students at class who are more than that to female students
this sentence is uncommon.
KEEP SPIRIT, KEEP STUDY.