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Factors contributing to job satisfaction of adults at work



carolamores 1 / 2  
Sep 19, 2010   #1
AS MOST PEOPLE SPEND A MAJOR PART OF THEIR ADULT LIFE AT WORK, JOB SATISFACTION IS AN IMPORTANT ELEMENT OF INDIVIDUAL WELLBEING.
WHAT FACTORS CONTRIBUTE TO JOB SATISFACTION?
HOW REALISTIC IS THE EXPECTATION OF JOB SATISFACTION FOR ALL WORKERS?

As it commonly understood, job satisfaction plays a significant role in everyone's life somewhat. This can be easily seen while focusing on what types of benefits employees received by their organizations. It is believed that a variety of factors exert a great influence on job satisfaction. This will be proved by taking into account several aspects that appear to...

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ershad193 14 / 321  
Sep 20, 2010   #2
As it is commonly understood, job satisfaction plays a significant role in everyone's life somewhat . This can be easily seen while focusing on what types of benefits employees received byfrom their organizations. It is believed that a variety of factors exert a great influence on job satisfaction. This will be proved by taking into account several aspects that appear to be extremely relevant when it comes to expectations and stability.

Firstly, job satisfaction appears to confirm that employees are likely to become more productive and competent while working a certain number of hours instead of working full time job. As an example, workers whose main duties are related to jobs where thinking is paramount such as air controllers or pilots, are far much more effective than those ones whose jobs require them to stay long hours uninterruptedly. Therefore, the latter ones are unlikely to have job satisfaction and their expectations about it are simply unthinkable.

(What do you mean to say, that people working in desk jobs are unlikely to have job satisfaction and are generally ineffective? Do you think such an argument has any logical standing? If this is not what you meant, I suggest you read this paragraph out loud to yourself, and think whether whatever you've written is actually what you wanted to write)

Secondly, by liaising with an international environment, you have the oppotunity to expand your knowledge and achieve those expectations that most employees have some time in their lifes. For instante, to get promoted to another country may be soemthing you have been so much working for and fulfills your job satisfaction. It is driven in no small part by our own yearnings and aspirations to get ahead in life and consecuqntly it is a way to partly get that desirable job satisfaction. (Again I'm not sure of your meaning. Do you mean to say that international assignments lead to job satisfaction? Again this is easily refutable. Don't make arguments that can be easily refuted. You should think before you write)

To conclude, those much cited examples give us a plausible explanation about what some job satisfactions looks like and it can be found in so many different ways where enjoyment always has to be the core of our results.

Use a spell checker and see where you have made spelling mistakes.
OP carolamores 1 / 2  
Sep 20, 2010   #3
Hi,

First of all, I would like to thank you for such a favor. I have followed your piece of advice about trying to develop my ideas in a more compelling and logical way. To be honest, this is a thing I have to work a lot more in order to improve it because I consider i do not fully understand the whole concept about the topic.

Could I send you 1 or 2 more essays before taking my final exam (25th september) during this week?

Should I do it through this website or to your email?

best regards,

Carolina
ershad193 14 / 321  
Sep 20, 2010   #4
I once wrote an essay on this topic. Click on my username and find it. It may give you some ideas.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Sep 21, 2010   #5
To conclude, those much-cited examples give us a plausible explanation about what some types of job satisfaction look like, and it can be found in so many different ways where enjoyment always has to be the core of our process .

HOW REALISTIC IS THE EXPECTATION OF JOB SATISFACTION FOR ALL WORKERS?

You should write a sentence to answer this question.
It is realistic to think that all workers can have satisfaction, because satisfaction can come from many different sources.
OP carolamores 1 / 2  
Sep 21, 2010   #6
I must admit that I've to work a bit more on this essay and focus on the topic! Meanwhile, I've been working on a new one that its actually attached: could you have a look at it in order to see what i can improve! thanks a lot in advance!


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