Vns, I just have some suggestions to make :-) Study the way I reworded the essay that you wrote. I gave it a more academic and professional approach in order to make it more effective.
The majority of people these days would prefer to live as far from factories as possible. Since, it causes a lot of noises. Moreover, it can affect badly for people's health. As analyzed above, I oppose the upcoming plan.- People these days would rather live far away from factories because of the noise pollution and health risks that its operation exposes the community to. That is why I am joining the other community members in opposing the building of a factory near our community.- Written this way, you cover the prompt restatement, discussion presentation, and your personal opinion in a mere 2 lines :-)
When it comes to factories, the first thing came to my mind is noisiness. Obviously, There are numerous people who work as an employee in factories. Furthermore, there are lots of equipment and operating equipment. Therefore, it will mar our peaceful atmosphere. By way of illustration, envision yourself resting at night from the tough daily routine. Normally, you will feel the nature, sleeping at night. However, all of a sudden, those machines that factories utilize to produce their product continuously emit some horrible noises, and in parallel, you will hear the noises from workers who are discussing about how underprivileged are their families. Clearly, you will be interrupted by those aforementioned external facts.- Factories cause an uncontrollable amount of noise because of the equipment that is used in their production line. Opening the factory will remove the peace and tranquility of our community. Coming to noise and air pollution after a long day of hard work is not the way community members want to spend their rest time. They wish to have a peaceful atmosphere conducive to rest and relaxation, not stress from machine noise and air pollution.
Also, it is not the end of the story. People who dwell near the factory can acquire lots of diseases. In fact, there is an article that proved the difference of the health between people who live far away from the factories and the ones who reside near it. The static shows that life expectancy of people who live around the factories can greatly reduce. Since, there are tremendous chemical substance contains in factories' emissions and the people who live around it cannot evade from inhaling it each day. It will accumulate, as time goes by. Hence, it can lead to many diseases such lung cancer, heart disease e.t.c. For instance, imagine yourself going to the university and the only path to reach there is by passing the factory. This circumstance will daily happen.- Health issues also about for those who live near factories. The health problems have been attributed to the extreme amount of chemical substances released into the water and air of a community. The Pan Pacific Electric and Gas Company was one of the largest lawsuits ever before brought the courts that more than proved the ill effects of building a factory of any sort, near a community, can cause.- By using a solid example rather than third party information, you add academic credibility to your paper.
By way of conclusion based on the arguments explored above. Noisiness, are the facts that made me totally oppose of building a factory near our home. Since, we cannot sleep properly at night due to machines and workers. Furthermore, it contaminates air , thus leading us toward unhealthy l- It is because of the aforementioned reasons that I strongly support the opposition to the building of a factory near our community. Noise and health issues are not supposed to be a daily part of our lives, by allowing the factory to rise, these will become part of our daily activities instead. Therefore, the factory should not be allowed to open near the community.