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The Fairmont Island has four benefits: local inhabitants, scenery, the culture and accommodation


M3L1 26 / 6 11  
Nov 20, 2015   #1
IELTS task 1 - The benefits and the drawbacks of visiting Fairmont Island

The benefits and drawbacks of Fairmont Island are depicted in the pie charts. According to the visitors, the highest plus point for Fairmont is its people while the most problematic one is the high cost of living. It can be seen that tourists are interesting about the local residents and the scenery of the island, on the other hand they claimed to dislike about the unreasonable living cost.

The Fairmont Island has four benefits. The tourists enjoy to interacting with the local inhabitants the most, it rates at 40%. In addition, the scenery also has a good impression for the visitors, depicting at 37% of the total. Ultimately, the culture and accommodation have almost the same figure, one percent quarrel of both ratio.

On the other hand, there are also four main drawbacks that cause visitors unwillingly to come. The highest problem is the cost of living, just under half of the total. The entertainment, furthermore, is the second highest factor for tourists to visit representing at nearly a third. Interestingly, the weather and the food quality factors place in the third and the last, at 20% and 5% successively.




akhfan 5 / 9 3  
Nov 21, 2015   #2
The tourists enjoyto interacting with the local inhabitants as the largerst proportions at 40% . In addition the scenery also has a good impression forat the visitors, depicting more than a third as the second highest figure .
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,198 464  
Nov 21, 2015   #3
I have read this report, and then made some changes. Pay particular attention to what I have shown.

The benefits and drawbacks of Fairmont Island ...
A breakdown of the figure for Fairmont Island as a tourist attraction in terms of the advantages and disadvantages are presented in the pie charts. Tourists agree that the greatest advantage of this island is local people, while the converse would appear to be true for the high cost of living.

The Fairmont Island has four benefits. The tourists ...
A closer look at the chart shows how tourists enjoy the four immense benefits that the Fairmont Island provides. 40% of visitors say that friendly local inhabitants are the major attraction, followed by the breathtaking scenery, with 37%. When it comes to accommodation, this factor is adequate to meet tourists' need. This accounts for 11%, while 12% of people say that culture aspects are the reason why they visit this island.

APART FROM THE TANGIBLE BENEFITS, THIS ISLAND HAS FOUR MAIN DRAWBACKS THAT VISITORS SHOULD CONSIDER. The highest problem is the cost of living, just under half of the total. The entertainment, furthermore, RANKS second AS THE highest factor INTERRUPTING tourists to visit THIS ISLAND, representing at nearly a third. Interestingly, the weather factor places in the third, at 20% WHILE A VERY SMALL PROPORTION OF PEOPLE HAVE PROBLEM WITH FOOD.


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